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Thursday 31 October 2013

My Touch Rugby By Patrick

This My Picture On Touch Rugby. This Week We Learnt The Ways Of How To Play Touch Rugby. Today We Lost Our Game Non-Bibs Won & Bibs Lost. How They Kept On Running Straight And Had Their Plans Sorted Out.We Are Still Learning How To Play Touch. Next Week We Are Versing Rm 7, Give Us Luck

Tuesday 29 October 2013

My Maths Whizz Results By Patrick

This is my results on Maths Whizz results I have spent 60 minutes in total an 5 minutes on replay and 55 minutes on tutor mode

Friday 25 October 2013

My Comment To Room 1 By Patrick

This is my comment to room 1 hope you look at this room 1

Wednesday 23 October 2013

Peer Assessment Narrative Checklist By Patrick


Peer Assessment Narrative Checklist
Read over your partner’s work and judge their writing using the following criteria.

Narrative Criteria
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My partner has written an orientation

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My partner describes where the story takes place


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My partner has described when the story takes place
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My partner describes how the story begins
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My partner introduces characters
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My partner defines the characters’ personalities
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My partner describes what the characters look like

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My partner has created a problem that the characters experience
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My partner includes a resolution - how the problem / situation was solved
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My partner has written a final concluding statement

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My partner uses a variety of language features, e.g. active verbs, conjunctions, similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, personification

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Peer Assessment Surface Features Checklist


Surface Features Criteria
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My partner writes in full sentences
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My partner sequences his/her ideas clearly
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My partner uses complex sentences

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My partner varies sentence beginnings

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My partner uses conjunctions e.g. “and” correctly

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My partner uses capital letters correctly throughout writing

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My partner uses full stops correctly throughout writing
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My partner spells all words correctly

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My partner proof reads his / her writing
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My partner edits his/her writing-by making changes to the vocabulary e.g. said - yelled, asked, etc.
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My partner writes in paragraphs
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This is Peer Assessment Narrative Checklist count how many smiley faces I have got from my partner Raymond

My Results On Xtra Maths By Patrick

This is my results on Xtra Maths I have got 22 again for today for racing the teacher

Tuesday 22 October 2013

My Results On Xtra Maths By Patrick

This is my results on Xtra maths I have got 22 for today in a row. 


Monday 21 October 2013

My Questions On The Tamaki River BY Patrick


This is my padlet on the Tamaki River I hope you enjoy.

My Maths Whizz Results By Patrick

This is my results on Maths Whizz I have got one of my questions right. 

My Results On Xtra Maths By Patrick

This is my results on Xtra Maths I have got 5 wrong I really need to try my best to reach the next stage Multiplication.

My Maths Whizz Results By Patrick

This is my results on Maths Whizz I have spent 65 minutes on tutor mode and 4 minutes on replay mode. I have attempted 21 exercises and 9 tests. I have not moved that much because I have not been doing my tasks properly.  


Friday 18 October 2013

My Tamaki River Connections By Patrick

This is my popplet on my Tamaki River Connection I hope you enjoy:)

Xtra Maths Results By Patrick

This is my results on Xtra Maths I am improving my maths but I am trying my best to move up to Multiplication.

My Homework T4 Week 1 By Patrick

This is my Homework for this week, come and look at how I have solved all of my problems.

Wednesday 16 October 2013

My Xtra Maths Results By Patrick

This is my results on Xtra Maths I have not been improving my maths so that means I have to work really hard on my maths to go up to Times Tables


Tuesday 15 October 2013

My Maths Whizz Results By Patrick

This is my results on Maths Whizz i have got a answer right out of ten questions and I got 60% out of 100%

Monday 14 October 2013

My Maths Whizz Results By Patrick

This is my maths whizz results I have got one of my questions right


My Xtra Maths results By Patrick

This is my results on Xtra Maths I have not been moved up to times tables yet that means that I really need to work hard on my maths too move up to times tables